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 A bit of free form poetry for us all to enjoy

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Na_nashi

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PostSubject: A bit of free form poetry for us all to enjoy   A bit of free form poetry for us all to enjoy EmptyFri Sep 17, 2010 5:02 am

un fking real
keep pming really
you feel supported by him
let me give you some advice
don't count on it
cause any min
he turns
no loyalty in that one
none at all
and he deserves no respect
let him play all sides
let him think he is oh so smart
but soon he'll be all alone
and then he can watch the destruction he caused
and if that makes his day
good for him
we all know god will judge him
for everything he does in his life
and pretending friendship is not really something to be proud of
I was so wrong
I really thought I saw brilliance
that I saw goodness
excellence
but no
that was but a coating
to disguise a true despicable nature
where he uses people
and he prefers to use friends
which makes it even more horrible
and he will laugh it all away
and pretend it's all false
but he knows exactly what I mean
he just isn 't man enough to fess up
we should really just pity him
sad sad, little individual
living in a world of pretending
soon the bubble will burst
and if he really has half the wits he claims he has
he will realise what he lost
but never admit it
oh no
too much of a so called tough guy to admit
he'll just laugh it all away, pretending it's insane
but underneath the laughter
there is just a bit of knowledge
a bit of realisation
that this is the truth
of course it isn't easy to admit one owns mistakes
own weaknesses
especially not
when you claim you are far out the best thing that god put on this earth
well let me tell you this
god will be very disappointed
but hey lets maintain the air
lets pretend that you are an honourable man
that you really are the one that can judge others without being judged
and lets above all pretend
isn't it a sad life when it's all based on pretend
i wonder if you really realise who you are, with all the layers of misleading
layers of deception
of trying to fool yourself that you are the man
you may think this is an attack on you....which you won't admit, since that would be admitting to involvement
this is just a clarification of how deeply and sadly disappointed I am
to finally have several items of proof
that you are a complete and utter bas tard
I hope you fking choke in your pms
clearly you are not half as smart af you think you are
otherwise you would be doing a better job in covering your pathetic ass
I see you haven't spoken up to any of my words
cause you know it's all true
and obviously you don't have any defence at all
so keep laughing, little man
I see right through you
and as i said weeks ago
you really are no friend of mine
so keep amusing yourself with the ignorant of this world
keep manipulating them
but let me tell you this
you have no fking clue what friendship is
and for that I pity you deeply
cause with this attitude
you will die alone
and even god won't be able to help you then
and as you said many times
hell is being without god
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maggie4818mag
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PostSubject: Re: A bit of free form poetry for us all to enjoy   A bit of free form poetry for us all to enjoy EmptyFri Sep 17, 2010 6:34 am

well grr who you mean in this poeme ?
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PostSubject: Re: A bit of free form poetry for us all to enjoy   A bit of free form poetry for us all to enjoy EmptyFri Sep 17, 2010 9:06 am

Beautiful poem.....but wait.....shouldn't you be acknowledging RC for that one? Or at the very least referencing one of meetme's logs?
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PostSubject: Re: A bit of free form poetry for us all to enjoy   A bit of free form poetry for us all to enjoy EmptySun Oct 24, 2010 3:18 am

oh come n what happened with all writers in this section
no more poemes heh
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TheLegend
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PostSubject: Re: A bit of free form poetry for us all to enjoy   A bit of free form poetry for us all to enjoy EmptySun Oct 24, 2010 4:07 pm

Oh, I got it. He is talking about Capt.
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PostSubject: Re: A bit of free form poetry for us all to enjoy   A bit of free form poetry for us all to enjoy EmptyMon Oct 25, 2010 4:30 am

i still have no idea who he is reffering to ,
usually doesnt get what Nashi says ,uh oh and he is so mad at me now heh
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TheLegend
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PostSubject: Re: A bit of free form poetry for us all to enjoy   A bit of free form poetry for us all to enjoy EmptyMon Oct 25, 2010 11:46 am

The question is who DOES know what he is ever talking about?

One of the many reasons to ignore him.
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PostSubject: Re: A bit of free form poetry for us all to enjoy   A bit of free form poetry for us all to enjoy EmptyTue Oct 26, 2010 5:10 am

I have no idea what or who he is talking about!
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PostSubject: Re: A bit of free form poetry for us all to enjoy   A bit of free form poetry for us all to enjoy EmptyTue Oct 26, 2010 8:06 am

I wish I had known what a drunk he was a long time ago in the zone. I could have had much more fun.
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PostSubject: Re: A bit of free form poetry for us all to enjoy   A bit of free form poetry for us all to enjoy EmptyTue Oct 26, 2010 8:57 am

IF YOU CAN KEEP YOUR HEAD WHEH ALL ABOUT YOU
ARE LOSING THEIRS AND BLAMING IT ON Y IF YOU CAN TRUST YOURSELF WHEN ALL MEN DOUBT YOU, BUT MAKE ALLOWANCE FOR THEIR DOUBTING TOO IF YOU CAN WAIT AND NOT BE TIRED BY WAITING, OR, BEING LIED ABOUT, DON'T DEAL IN LIES, OR, BEING HATED, DON'T GIVE WAY TO HATING, AND YET DON'T LOOK TOO GOOD, NOR TALK TOO WISE,

IF YOU CAN DREAM AND NOT MAKE DREAMS YOUR MASTER IF YOU CAN THINK AND NOT MAKE THOUGHTS YOUR AIM

IF YOU CAN MEET WITH TRIUMPH AND DISASTER AND TREAT THOSE TWO IMPOSTORS JUST THE SAME IF YOU CAN BEAR TO HEAR THE TRUTH YOU'VE SPOKEN TWISTED BY KNAVES TO MAKE A TRAP FOR FOOLS, OR WATCH THE THINGS YOU GAVE YOUR LIFE TO BROKEN, AND STOOP AND BUILD 'EM UP WITH WORN OUT TOOLS


THATS A NICE POEME HEH
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